Narrative\Rubric 2

Sandy invited her friends to have a sleepover. Then her friend came knocking on the door she opened it and she said “ hello thanks for coming” The friends said “ it all right” they came in sat down had some snack and just started to talk. After that that had a room each. Sandy was in her own room she was lying down on the bed and just reading her book so she could fall asleep. Her book fell down and it was all quiet when she closed her eyes her friends was in her mind and her self as well. Sandy and her friends went to a fun place to have some fun. There was a lot of things to do Their roller coasters there was some cars you could ride in there was just too much things.

Sandy went to the bumping car game she hopped in the car and she started to bump people and people started to bump her too. Her friends joined her  and Sandy was just bumping her friends. Sandy started to get a sore head so she hopped out of the car and went and sat down. Her friends was just bumping each other but then they thought of Sandy. Rosco said “ where is sandy?” And the friends said “ I don’t know” So they hopped out of the car and went looking for Sandy. They went where the roller coaster she wasn’t there they went where where the show is she wasn’t anywhere.

But then the security came and they got kicked out because they messed everything and didn’t clean it up when they were told to clean it up. So once they got kicked out they weren’t Sandys friend anymore because she made her friends get in big trouble. So once it was closed she went out and she saw her friends and she said “ what are you guys doing out here?” And they said “ we got kicked out” And she said “ oh sorry” and they said “ it’s all right”

Sandy woke up and she just had breakfast to forget her dream.