Narrative Writing Practice

The brother’s were fighting while the sister was just playing with her toys until she got bored. The little sister went off into the streets and ended up where the farm was she went in the farm and the plants were all tall that she couldn't see anything except for the sky.

The brother’s stopped fighting. Dallin went to where his little sister was and she wasn't there so he went inside the house and she wasn't there Dallin started panicking. He shouted her name out “Anne!” he repeated and repeated but no reply. Dallin told his brothers what happened and all the brothers were saying “ WHAT!” And Dallin said “She’s not where the toys are or in the house”. So they went in the car and showed a picture of Anne to people and they said “No sorry.” After that they stopped by the farm.

Anne was shouting and shouting their brothers names. The brothers hoped out of the car and separated while the other brother stayed in the car just incase their little sister might end up where the car was. They looked and looked it was night time and they still haven’t found Anne. Anne was crying and starving and her brothers were trying their best it was almost day time.

And one of the brothers found Anne and the brother returned her back in the car and the all the brother went other the car.

And they were all happy.

Mother goat and her seven kids

There was once a mother goat and her seven little kids. The mother is going somewhere and the mother said to her kids “ don’t open the door to anyone especially the hungry wolf”  “okay” said the little kids.

The mother went and the wolf heard everything before the mother left. The wolf went to the door and said little kids open the door it’s me your mother and the little one said no because my mum has a squeaky voice like she is singing. And the wolf went singing practice so the wolf can so just like the mother.

The wolf went and said let me in i have some sweets from the market and the little one looked out the window and said “ you not my mother because my mother doesn't have a tail. And the wolf went to the dental clinic and said fix my tail before smash you and the dental clinic said “ Okay Okay” And the wolf went back and said little kids open the door and they opened it and the wolf got them.

And then the mother came back and then saw a the wolf and the mother smash them and the wolf went flying over the tree and the mother got their kids and then kissed the and gave the a slap on the ear for opening the door.   

Mrs Goat and her little seven kids

There was once a mother goat and her seven little kids. The mother is going somewhere and the mother said to her kids “ don’t open the door to anyone especially the hungry wolf”  “okay” said the little kids.

The mother went and the wolf heard everything before the mother left. The wolf went to the door and said little kids open the door it’s me your mother and the little one said no because my mum has a squeaky voice like she is singing. And the wolf went singing practice so the wolf can so just like the mother.

The wolf went and said let me in i have some sweets from the market and the little one looked out the window and said “ you not my mother because my mother doesn't have a tail. And the wolf went to the dental clinic and said fix my tail before smash you and the dental clinic said “ Okay Okay” And the wolf went back and said little kids open the door and they opened it and the wolf got them.

And then the mother came back and then saw a the wolf and the mother smash them and the wolf went flying over the tree and the mother got their kids and then kissed the and gave the a slap on the ear for opening the door.   

The ugly duckling

There were once a family of ducks the mum had a chick once it came out and it was different than the others it was grey while the other duck were yellow. The mum thought it was a different chick from another family. So the little chick decided to go somewhere else.

The grey chick thought he won't find anyone and the he will be alone forever and never had friends. While he was walking this lady just came over and then picked up the ugly duckling and then took care of it. The lady gave it a bath and as he grew and grew the owner of the chick took it to the pond where it is to post to be and one the chick went to the pond and look at it reflection.

And when he looked at his reflection he was grown and he and he saw everyone else and everyone was his friends and he lived happily ever after.   

The ugly duckling

Title: The ugly duckling

Author: Hans Christian Andersen

Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses): Ugly duckling, the brothers, the mum, farmyard folks,

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail):  Farm and a pond.

What was the problem? He looked like no one and he was all alone and had no friends.

What was the solution? He was found he was cared and he made friends.

What was the Moral of the Story? To talk to someone and tell them what is worn, Instead keeping your mouth close.

My favourite part of the story was? That when he was found and cared and had friends again.

Title: The ugly duckling

Author: Hans Christian Andersen

Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses): Ugly duckling, the brothers, the mum, farmyard folks,

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail):  Farm and a pond.

What was the problem? He looked like no one and he was all alone and had no friends.

What was the solution? He was found he was cared and he made friends.

What was the Moral of the Story? To talk to someone and tell them what is worn, Instead keeping your mouth close.

My favourite part of the story was? That when he was found and cared and had friends again.

The hare and the tortoise race

Hi. My name is the Tortoise, And i have a really good reason. i’ve got short legs and I am  really really slow !  I am really slow a chewing.

In a race, I came last Everytime . I am always the one that gets no medal. And it happens every time. Its not fair because they are all fast and i am the only slow one in the race. I blame the Aesop. he’s the one who wrote it.

It happened in March and that time of the year the hare go a bit crazy. I am so busy springing in the spring sometimes my thoughts quite keep up.  Do you know what i’ll tell you what happened just so it can be clear and that it wasn’t really my fault. It can happened to anyone.

Do you know that old Hare that lives next to me witch is my  next door? He is so bouncy like the first time i was watching him i thought he was bouncing on a trampoline.  While he was bouncing i was getting ready for the challenge. While I was eating this Hare just came out of nowhere and said “ hey you’re not going to win anyways you should just stay home”  While he was talking to me I was just still chewing.

The race has began everyone was getting ready for the race while i was just looking at everyone then i did what they were doing. After that we raced i was coming last but then everyone was slowing down and then i was coming first. While hare was coming last.  Once i had finish the race i had my medal.   

The tortoise was really happy but when he saw the hare walking away he felt sorry for him but happy at the same time. Once they had finish the tortoise went to the hare and said “ i won! yeah and you loose” and the hare looked sad and the tortoise went to him and said “ hey are you alright?” and the hare said “ yeah i’m alright “ saying it in a slowly voice.  And the tortoise said “ ok just making sure bye have a nice day”  but the tortoise saw the people coming to the picture of him but he didn’t like it but he said their theirs the winner pointing at hare’s house.

And the tortoise went home with his gold medal.  

the alive marshmallow and the little strong dog

There was once an little strong dog and a alive marshmallow. As the alive marshmallow was walking from school he went home and turned on the T.V and he felt something touching his leg and brushed against his leg the alive marshmallow was feeling strange. He looked down and he saw nothing so he turned of the T.V and he went to eat as he was eating he still felt the strange feeling down his leg  he looked down again and he saw nothing again.

He stopped eating and he went to have a rest he couldn’t have a rest because that strange thing keep bothering him he fell asleep. When he woke up he didn’t feel the strange thing again but in a second he felt it again. So he went to play because he thinks maybe while he is playing it will fall off and go away so he won’t feel the strange feeling again. When he finished he looked down and he saw nothing again as he look down he felt it again so he went and wet his feet so it will be gone for ever. But he started to feel itchy now. the alive marshmallow got really angry and tired so he slapped his feet so it will be dead but he didn’t get it.

After that he tried to ignore it but he couldn't help. After that he touched where the itchy bit was and he got it and it was a little strong dog. And the alive marshmallow puted the strong dog in a glass box till it’s

grown and he felt nothing for the rest of the day.

The Dragon Machine

It was raining and George looked outside the more he listened the more he saw the dragons

He saw.

He had dragons and he knew there was going to be trouble. The dragons was in the house making a mess.

Geroge feed them and he went to the library and the dragons  got all the books and messed it up. George had to clean it up but it wasn't him.

He went to the shop and the dragons cracked the stuff and george said sorry i’ll clean it up but it wasn't him.  

He went to get some advice and he had a map about dragons where they live and so they can be safe.

George made a dragon machine George flew the dragon machine and the dragons followed him but George was tired and when he woke up in the morning the dragon's were gone and he was lonely and George's parents came and got him and the dragon machine.

And they celebrated something and George had a dog.

But they didn’t know it was a dragon.