Farm Animaition

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On Saturday

Writing test

Planning:

They went to a farm when brad wasn't allowed but his friend was allowed. They couldn’t find their way out and there was a voice saying where are you going to Brad and brad friend didn’t hear until brad figured it out it was his mum so they found their way out and brad apologized to his mum and his mum forgave him and brad and his friend into the room and just played games

Start Writing Here:

I walking to the farm with my friends when I wasn't allowed to go. As we got closer to the farm I heard a voice saying where are you going I told my friend can you hear that? And he said “no” so he started to feel weird. As they were walking they found this sort of old looking farm it was dark in side you couldn’t see a thing.

But lucky his friend brought a torch he turned on his torch and it was scarey but their was nothing in their but just hay lying on the ground. Brad hears the same voice again “ where are you going?”

he was starting to feel scared so he was wondering if they could go and eat and his friend said “yeah sure” But the thing is they forgot which they came from so they didn’t go to the restaurant because they couldn’t find their way back.

Brad was scared cause he didn’t know what to do. So they just sat down. Something came from the shed and it was the same old voice again. “ Im starting to feel scared because I keep hearing that voice and it just won’t get away” Brad said in a shaky voice. His friend said “ what is it saying” Brad said “ it saying where are you going?” Brad friend said in a confused voice “ maybe umm someone is saying where are you going because that person dosen’t know where you're going I guess.”

After that Brad was thinking who doesn't know where I am going?as he was thing that voice came back then Brad just realized it was his mum. They stood up and found their way out. When they found their way out Brad ran to his mum and said “ sorry I went when I wasn't allowed to sorry”  Brad mum said “ it’s alright I forgive you”

After that Brad and his friend went in his room and played games and that voice he heard never was heard again.

  

Narrative Writing Practice

The brother’s were fighting while the sister was just playing with her toys until she got bored. The little sister went off into the streets and ended up where the farm was she went in the farm and the plants were all tall that she couldn't see anything except for the sky.

The brother’s stopped fighting. Dallin went to where his little sister was and she wasn't there so he went inside the house and she wasn't there Dallin started panicking. He shouted her name out “Anne!” he repeated and repeated but no reply. Dallin told his brothers what happened and all the brothers were saying “ WHAT!” And Dallin said “She’s not where the toys are or in the house”. So they went in the car and showed a picture of Anne to people and they said “No sorry.” After that they stopped by the farm.

Anne was shouting and shouting their brothers names. The brothers hoped out of the car and separated while the other brother stayed in the car just incase their little sister might end up where the car was. They looked and looked it was night time and they still haven’t found Anne. Anne was crying and starving and her brothers were trying their best it was almost day time.

And one of the brothers found Anne and the brother returned her back in the car and the all the brother went other the car.

And they were all happy.

Orienteering

In orienteering my partner was Rave we were the last ones to get our maps there was 4 maps
we had to do. As we were walking the man said " what are you looking for?" And we said "g"
he said " the letter g is down where the bottom field is in front of the car"  and we looked where he
pointed and it was far away and rave said " you go there and I'll go there." So rave went to the close
one and I went to the far one. But Rave had to go where I was so I told her that you have
to go where I was and stable it. But she all ready done it with another stable.
We didn't get to do all four maps but we did 1 2 3. And it was fun.

The Dragon Machine

It was raining and George looked outside the more he listened the more he saw the dragons

He saw.

He had dragons and he knew there was going to be trouble. The dragons was in the house making a mess.

Geroge feed them and he went to the library and the dragons  got all the books and messed it up. George had to clean it up but it wasn't him.

He went to the shop and the dragons cracked the stuff and george said sorry i’ll clean it up but it wasn't him.  

He went to get some advice and he had a map about dragons where they live and so they can be safe.

George made a dragon machine George flew the dragon machine and the dragons followed him but George was tired and when he woke up in the morning the dragon's were gone and he was lonely and George's parents came and got him and the dragon machine.

And they celebrated something and George had a dog.

But they didn’t know it was a dragon.      

Ramonadel Happy Dog

This movie is about a dog that found his bone.

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